I'm struggling with this one. More women in gaming and eSports might also be due to the fact that more women are playing. I don't think males dominating the space is changing although the article makes it seem like it with the opening sentiments. I'm not against women in gaming but instead of misrepresenting the realities, maybe instead highlight in more detail the pioneers, and what it takes for the community as a whole to support all who seek it in the gaming and eSports spaces.